After more than a year of work and at least one monumental rewrite, it's finally complete. Some of you offered help before - thank you very much. Your advice was invaluable.
I've had lots of trouble with the new deviantart submission form and in the end I gave it up as a bad job, and just uploaded to Fanfiction.net, which was less frustrating... until I realised the formatting was totally butchered. x_x So it might be a bit confusing, because the breaks I put in disappeared, and... yeah. At least the paragraphs are seperated this time.
It's ten parts long, which is considerably shorter than the original edition. Comments, criticism and rotten fruit are all very welcome.
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