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Wraith and Eventide Kyrii
Posted: 29 Aug 2014 12:25 am
by Nogitsune
"Behold the power of darkness!"
"Strangely enough, I'm a morning person."
Re: Wraith and Eventide Kyrii
Posted: 29 Aug 2014 06:24 am
by AngharadTy
Seems like that wraith has a fat neck and a double chin. But the mouth, eyes, and ears are all pretty great, so I'll allow it.
Eventide looks oddly fiery... Like a sunset over a burning forest?
Re: Wraith and Eventide Kyrii
Posted: 29 Aug 2014 12:37 pm
by Color Wheel
Wraith: Not sure what's going on with the neck/stomach area here. Why is it so wide? The rest of the body is pretty good, but I feel like the expression's a bit bland - it either needs to look more sly or more vicious, because right now it looks somewhat blank.
Eventide: A bit too much blue here for my tastes, but this is shaded beautifully (particularity the mane), so I'll let it slide. The eye might have been better as a different shade, and the straight gradients means it's hands aren't going to match when it moves them out of that position.