"Words fall" - a poem

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Yuka
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"Words fall" - a poem

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Words fall, empty as sin on deaf ears,
Eyes wide shut to catch the tears.

Don’t cry –
We’re all blind, somehow.
Don’t close your eyes and wonder
Why you see nothing but darkness.

The time of ignorance is upon us,
But that doesn’t mean hopeless.
Just remember,
You’re not tied down, like us –
Flowers growing into a sun-free world,
Promised to futility.

Don’t tie yourself down. It’s not worth it.

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