Possible BC entry

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Vixie.
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Possible BC entry

Post by Vixie. »

I thought about entering this picture into the BC, it's not my best by a long shot but I never enter my best work anymore because of art thieves.

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Post by Dead Webby »

Its a good peice of art, but I think that the nearest leg to the front looks a little odd. The 'elbow' part where it bends seems too high up the arm.
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Post by Ziggy »

I didn't think that was the elbow, I thought it was the curve of its shoulder.
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Post by Twisted »

Very nice, but that leg is jointed too far up-a bit lower would be nice :) The white part of the face looks a teensy bit unshaded, but that's it.
It's thankful that someone draws a Lupe as a Lupe and not a wolf.
And if you're planning to enter the BC-good luck. Lupe is a hard category ^^
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Post by Jazzy »

It's thankful that someone draws a Lupe as a Lupe and not a wolf.
I disagree that it is a Lupe...where are its whiskers? It could be any (bright green) dog.

I second the shoulder comment.
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Post by Vixie. »

Thank you all for your comments. I'll be sure to fix the things you pointed out to me, though I did not put wiskers on my lupe because it is a female.
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Post by AngharadTy »

Female Lupes have whiskers too. There's no sexual dimophism in Neopets excepting those created by the Usuki and Royal paint brushes.
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Post by Vixie. »

I know, I just thought that it would make it more feminine, but if everyone thinks it would look better with wiskers I'll add them.
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Post by AngharadTy »

I think it would look more like a real Lupe, but you can give her any custom design you like.
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Post by Ziggy »

Twisted wrote:Very nice, but that leg is jointed too far up-a bit lower would be nice :)
Im not sure, it looks ok to me, unless I've misunderstood what you mean. If anything, it looks too low.
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Post by Vixie. »

Well It was supposed to be the shoulder joint... maybe I'll just crop that part off or something.
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