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http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v630/ ... antUni.jpg

Thoughts, comments, criticisms, anything would be appreciated. This is the black and white version that is still in pencil. I can add, remove, redo or color in any way anyone here may want.
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Post by Akjara »

Nifty! I like the head most, escpecially the curved horn on top and the small one at the chin. Nice idea!

The only critic I would have, would be that the bowed foreleg looks somehow strange. As if it would be too long if the Uni ever straightened it. You know what I mean?
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Post by Hawk »

I like it :D It's spiky.

But I agree with Akjara about the leg, and although I'm not very good with horselike anatomy, don't they have ankle-ish things?
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Post by Dead Webby »

Hmm, i agree- the front leg looks a little strange. May I be picky and say that the feet seem a little small?

Apart from that, well done, its very good. Oh, i just remembered something else- it only appears to have one horn.
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Dead Webby wrote:Hmm, i agree- the front leg looks a little strange. May I be picky and say that the feet seem a little small?

Apart from that, well done, its very good. Oh, i just remembered something else- it only appears to have one horn.
I'll see if I can't fix that since you, Akjara and Hawk agree.

I agree the feet bugged me to death. I want two-toed claws but they never seem to look quite big enough...

Er - you'd like more horns?
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Post by Float »

If you mean feet like.. a camel or something, then I'd make the leg much straighter (it would only bend at the actual joints, otherwise the bone on the front leg would actually be shaped like a (. I love the head to pieces by the way
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Float wrote:If you mean feet like.. a camel or something, then I'd make the leg much straighter (it would only bend at the actual joints, otherwise the bone on the front leg would actually be shaped like a (. I love the head to pieces by the way
I was thinking more like a raptor or something.
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