Just want some opinions on my ... art.
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Just want some opinions on my ... art.
I am looking for some criticism.
I know there not very good thats why I need advice with them ^^.
(my pet oceantic this is his custom look)
(my pet Jayce. He is a darigan gelert)
(just a random pink zafara xD)
Also does the bandage over his eyes look okay?:
Edit: This is not drawn by me on neopets I am Tashamelia888 not Darkdusk sorry about the confusion. This is a makeable and I only coloured it in sorry again ^^;.
I know there not very good thats why I need advice with them ^^.
(my pet oceantic this is his custom look)
(my pet Jayce. He is a darigan gelert)
(just a random pink zafara xD)
Also does the bandage over his eyes look okay?:
Edit: This is not drawn by me on neopets I am Tashamelia888 not Darkdusk sorry about the confusion. This is a makeable and I only coloured it in sorry again ^^;.
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The names either Llama, Jack or Tasha
(my real name being Tarsha but I never use it xP)
Leave the purple pets alone! The orange spots happen to be one of the best contrasts in neopets
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Since we're both learning as we go, maybe I shouldn't be writing this, but...
on the last board I posted like this, someone revealed to me the magic of the "bezier" tool, inverted "S" next to the line draw.
That is if you were using MS paint to do these.
If not, I have NO idea. Sorry!
Also, the bandage on your lupe, is defying the laws of physics right now, unless its tied to his fur, or embedded in his skull. (eww)
That's all I can say! Good luck, and we'll keep learning together, YAYness!
Edit: I really like your Zafara pic (the random pink one)
on the last board I posted like this, someone revealed to me the magic of the "bezier" tool, inverted "S" next to the line draw.
That is if you were using MS paint to do these.
If not, I have NO idea. Sorry!
Also, the bandage on your lupe, is defying the laws of physics right now, unless its tied to his fur, or embedded in his skull. (eww)
That's all I can say! Good luck, and we'll keep learning together, YAYness!
Edit: I really like your Zafara pic (the random pink one)
All of the major programs have a bezier too, and the symbol will be similar so no worries there.danceu4ia wrote:That is if you were using MS paint to do these.
If not, I have NO idea. Sorry!
I'd suggest sticking to thinner line art like you have with the Darigan Gelert. It looks much nicer when compared to your other art.
Also on your first pic, the Ruki pay attention to perspective. Currently the hind feet are larger than the front feet which makes them appear closer to us when it seems like they should be the same distance away as the front.
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Thank you very much but I do not under stand whats so good about the bezier tool I can never use it very well ^^;.
Well thank you both.
For some reason I live thick lineart it might be because of the way I grew up or something because no one I know likes thick lineart xD.
I will try to draw with thinner lines but for some reason thicker lines are easier.
Well thank you both.
For some reason I live thick lineart it might be because of the way I grew up or something because no one I know likes thick lineart xD.
I will try to draw with thinner lines but for some reason thicker lines are easier.
The names either Llama, Jack or Tasha
(my real name being Tarsha but I never use it xP)
Leave the purple pets alone! The orange spots happen to be one of the best contrasts in neopets
Is the wolf one a later piece than the others? Because the anatomy on the wolf thing is vasty superior to the anatomy on any of the others. Except for the obvious issue of the bandage being positioned weirdly, its a pretty nice piece of pixel art.
The front paws are gorgeously drawn......for a paint picture.
Comparing it to the pink zafara, its in a different league.
edit: wait....are you not darkdusk? I assumed you were? Was the line art on that one done by someone else then?
The front paws are gorgeously drawn......for a paint picture.
Comparing it to the pink zafara, its in a different league.
edit: wait....are you not darkdusk? I assumed you were? Was the line art on that one done by someone else then?
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The lineart was done by someone else ^^.
I am sorry about the confusion
I have edited the first post to let others know .
I am sorry about the confusion
I have edited the first post to let others know .
The names either Llama, Jack or Tasha
(my real name being Tarsha but I never use it xP)
Leave the purple pets alone! The orange spots happen to be one of the best contrasts in neopets
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Has anyone have any idea how to make the lupe still have the blindfold but have it actually allowing it to look like the tied to him?
I have no clue how to put it on him and still make it look genuine.
I have no clue how to put it on him and still make it look genuine.
The names either Llama, Jack or Tasha
(my real name being Tarsha but I never use it xP)
Leave the purple pets alone! The orange spots happen to be one of the best contrasts in neopets
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Because I can't draw legs or arms they turn out all funky.jessibean wrote: Why aren't the limbs attached to the ruki's body? ._.;
And rukis look cuter with no limbs.
The names either Llama, Jack or Tasha
(my real name being Tarsha but I never use it xP)
Leave the purple pets alone! The orange spots happen to be one of the best contrasts in neopets
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