Secret Agent Moye-please criticize!

[Veo]

Not a problem - I'd like to do a bit more shading on it, but you can go ahead and use it - I don't care the least bit. *smile*

My NP account is veo_dragoon0 - all I ask is some credit, and I'm fine. You can use the picture where -ever you want! ^_^

Good luck with the shading!

EDIT - use this picture, please. ^_^

<img src="http://i135.photobucket.com/albums/q147 ... iefer2.jpg">

[danceu4ia]

saved, signed (with your name of course!) and getting put on Moye's page, ASAP.

THANK YOU! ^^

[Veo]

Not a problem at all! I can't wait to see what it looks like on your page! ^_^

**hey . . . neofriend me? plz? **

[danceu4ia]

Better pic, AND a better explanation (Just for Archkiel)

<img src="http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m152 ... better.jpg">
Better shading? I think it is, but I can still correct.

I also changed the setting to a deserted alleyway, the buildings became a fence. A little more privacy than in the middle of the street, I guess.

I'm fairly happy with it, thanks for all the criticism, it really helped.
Anything I forgot?

[Float]

i think the tail looks pretty great now and the rest of moye looks suitably sketch instead of white. is all this still in paint?

[danceu4ia]

Yep, this is all still in MS paint.

Oh, and I put the vertical text in with Adobe, as well as some blurring.
(that's all I know how to do on Adobe, all the "layers" confuse the crap right outta me.)

[checkers]

That looks great I love your tails shading so 3D!
Hmm, I have to say this though. the way the shadow of the light beam makes the floor look bumy HUGE, it's like _____( )_____

The fence pannels/Buildings look wonky and uneven like that, the light beam doesn't fit to the floor.

[Jessi]

The shading on the tail looks wonderful! you did a fabulous job, and I think the shadows look fine :3 Good job!

[danceu4ia]

Teehee..."bumy huge"

I see what you mean about the shadow on the floor, but I'm unsure of how to fix it, unless....
I'll go tinker around with it a bit more.

Funny expression though, bumy huge.

Thanks for the compliments! I'm glad the shading wasn't as hard as I thought it was going to be, I should try this "shading" thing more often!

[checkers]

I see what you mean about the shadow on the floor, but I'm unsure of how to fix it, unless....
I'll go tinker around with it a bit more.

Thanks for the compliments! I'm glad the shading wasn't as hard as I thought it was going to be, I should try this "shading" thing more often!

Yeah keep up with the shading.

You could just remove that line in the shadow, like so the darker line isnt there and the draw it lower, uhm..i don't really know really because the shadow light is round but the floors straight, try doing that.
Remove that round dark yellow line and draw a new one in lower so it looks better? or just remove the line and have it shaded.
You could also use paint shop pro ( I saw this on my brothers PC) and use that Light effect put it right at the top and then it'd make the light look more light ray than a solid yellow object surrounding Moye.
I think the petpet could do with some colour in the eyes? ^^;