'Down With the Lion King'

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ZeDirceu
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'Down With the Lion King'

Post by ZeDirceu »

Hi! Well... um, I'm not really new, but I think I posted only once or twice here. Quick introduction: My name is Lim, I'm 15, I play Neopets sometimes, but I'm really interested in their art work, so I found this forum very fitting for me. :mrgreen: Well, I recently made this account on deviantART, and I really would like to see what you guys think of my artwork. I'm kinda proud of this one, even if it's my first attempt on Disney style:

<a href="http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/52059299/">
<img src="http://img387.imageshack.us/img387/1466 ... 6.png"></a>

(click for bigger version)


I'll post more later, as soon I scan them. For now, tell me what you people think about this one. :wink:
Ellie
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Post by Ellie »

Welcome =) I hope to see you around the forums ^^

I do like the comic, but the font is /really/ hard to read. Like, really. that's the main thing.

The bunny is adorable, though. xDD I like the half cloud half speech bubbles and pride rock in the background.


Sorry if this isn't helpful, but I almost never post on the art forum and I don't want to... I dunno, say the wrong thing. xDD -has probably screwed this up-
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Veo
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Post by Veo »

Welcome to the group, Lim - hope to see LOTS of work soon! ^__^

And yes, I have to agree with Ellie- just fix the font and you'll be perfect!

Once i could figure out what the text was, i got a little chuckle out of it - good job! :P
ZeDirceu
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Post by ZeDirceu »

Wow! I didn't expected to get so positive replies! =D

Changed the font, now it's much more readable. I'll maybe post another drawing today, I dunno if I'll have the time to. But thanks for the kind words, people :mrgreen:
Ellie
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Post by Ellie »

HAHA. It's hilarious now. xDD
Dead Webby
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Post by Dead Webby »

Aww, it's great! The one thing i would say is that the lineart is a tad wobbly on the lion's back leg, but I can't really critisize because its better than anything I could do XD
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Thanks VanillaCoke for the Set.
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Post by Lou 500 »

No offence but he looks severely constipated.
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Post by Spivsy »

Lou 500 wrote:With every possible offence, but he looks severely constipated.
That's better.
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