Mutant Buzz, crits?

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Dead Webby
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Mutant Buzz, crits?

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Being all excited about adopting a Mutant Buzz, (courtesy of Smurfie) I decided to make a custom design for one. I coloured the buzz in pencil rather than fineliner becuase I wanted him to look a grey-ish colour which i couldn't really do with pen.

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But. Me thinks that something looks odd, and as usual, i don't have a clue what. Thats where you guys come in- crits?

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Post by Nogitsune »

Since it's supposed to be custom and not an official one I'm not sure how to help. It looks good to me. Perhaps you miss the thick round tail with the warts on it?
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Post by Dead Webby »

Hmm, maybe that's it. I might just redraw the whole thing in a different position....
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Post by chickvw »

I think it's something with the yellow... so "smooth".. perhaps adding a bit of other colors to texture it up, like the blue? I love those wings, they're awesome!
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