"Outreach" (Non-neo)

[Yuka]

This is a picture I've been working on for the last few days. It ties into a bigger project I've been working on. The outlines, shading etc. were all drawn by hand; the blue colour was applied digitally. I quite like this style, but I want to get some opinions on it before I use it in other pictures.



Advice and comments welcome.

[checkers]

The colouring is nice, although the drawing itself looks as if the neck it should have has disappeard.

[Veo]

Are you looking for someone to redline it for you? Or are you looking for shading help? Or are you looking for anything possible?

[Yuka]

Thanks for the comments! Er, anything possible, I think. xD

[Veo]

I just made the changes that seemed natural to me. Even still, the back half looks funny to me, but I just wanted to outline a few things. I hope this helps.

Also, I didn't know if the black thing was a horn or another ear, so disregard me if i got it wrong.

Anyway, i love the originality of this piece, hope to see more soon! ^___^

[Yuka]

Wow! That's very, very helpful. Thank you so much. I'll definitely post a fixed version here soon. Thanks again!

[Veo]

Not a problem! Can't wait to see the finished product!