My attempt

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Taryth
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My attempt

Post by Taryth »

ok so this is my attempt at art.
I'm still practicing the hair and I didn't touch the clothes part.

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Post by checkers »

It's very nice, but I don't like the way one of the eyes is lower than the other and wonky (that being the left eye, to me) The ear also looks out of place.
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Post by miazilla »

Nice elf girl :) Since you say you are practising drawing hair, do you mind some constructive criticism?

I really like how you've given the hair texture and don't have it all in one tone. But hair, like everything else, is affected by lighting. The hair is lighter where it gets hit directly by light, usually the top of the head in a sort of circle around the crown of the head. It is also draker where it doesn't get hit by light, like behind someones shoulders.
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Post by Taryth »

Thank you very very VERY much for the constructive critisisms :)
I haven't drawn in years and am working very hard to try and learn, so every piece of advice greatly helps :)
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