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Re: Subetart : 40 Hydrus Mortiking Final!

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And now, the final version! ... half the size..

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And normal 200x200 sized.

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Re: Subetart : 40 Hydrus Mortiking Final!

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That's amazing as always!!!!!! The colours you chose are lovely, and I like the markings as well as the symbol on his tummy. The back fin is also very nice and the whole pose is awesome!!
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Re: Subetart : 40 Hydrus Mortiking Final!

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Ohh that's really pretty. I love the pose and the markings. The one on his face that look like a mustache is highly amusing (not sure if it was intentional or not though). I loved the webbed claws!

The one spot on the tail that is half bright yellow is driving me crazy though :(
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Re: Subetart : 40 Hydrus Mortiking Final!

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I love it! It looks a little off-center though, and some detail is lost in the resize, it makes your lineart look a tad thin. Those are minor complaints though. Great job! I love the horns, especially.
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Re: Subetart : 41 Reborn Legeica Flats!

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So, after a long time I finally inked and flat coloured the redo of the Reborn Legeica.

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More so because the old one was not that great, too stiff, etc etc.

I think I made it a bit too muscley. :D Crit as you see fit!


Seerow: Hah, I see that dark yellow spot now, I think I was gonna put it around that area a bit more for darker shadows, now it stands out too much..x_@

Mayhem: And this version is with the thicker lines, the original is 800 x 800 so when I shrank it down the lines were very very thin. x_x
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Re: Subetart : 41 Reborn Legeica Flats!

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I think it looks lovely! I adore the dynamic pose and the motion and fluidity of the flames. Would love to see this one shaded :D
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Re: Subetart : 41 Reborn Legeica Flats!

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Oooh I really like that, lovely movement and very majestic, the fire also look very good, nice and flowy. It doesn't look too muscly to me. The nostril looks very big, other than that it's great, I can't wait to see it shaded!!
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Re: Subetart : 41 Reborn Legeica Flats!

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Ooh, very nice. I really like this. The flames are superb!

The flame above the eye though, it cuts off the expression I think. Is it supposed to look neutral or with a bit of a scowl? It looks like it's TRYING to scowl, but the flame above the eye is hindering it.

Also, the rear legs look more dog-like than equine-like, but perhaps that's the perspective. I think the knee should be a *tad* higher on the leg?

Other than those things, I absolutely love this. If the Reborn Legeica looked like this, it would definitely be on my to-get list.
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Re: Subetart : 41 Reborn Legeica Flats!

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Woah, the Legeica is fabulous! The flames are transparent, the pose is cool. And I adore horses.
I'd definitely get one of them if they're really like that. But I think it'd be better if the scales are shinier and look more like a horse. Also a redder colour would look nice. Looking forward to seeing more of your art!
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Re: Subetart : 42 Reborn Legeica and Other

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Woo, its finished!


http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/9027 ... conqa4.jpg (For a contest on subeta..which I didnt win, nor place, lol )
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Re: Subetart : 42 Reborn Legeica and Other

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Aww, your contest entry is adorable.

The Legeica.... so much love for your Reborn Legeica. *_* The detail on the scales, especially the ones on its face, are lovely. The only think I'd change is the darkest shadow on its face; lighting's not one of my strengths, so I can't really explain my reasoning, but something about it seems off.
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Re: Subetart : 42 Reborn Legeica and Other

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I thnk it is a crime that I have not commented in this thread earlier XD
But omg I'm just in love with your stuff, it's so lively, full of movement,
just so much fun to look at. Especially your newest legeica, the one I saw
before was lovely but the pose is so much more fitting and that perspective
just makes me ever so happy XD I do agree though that there is something
off with the shadow on the face, maybe lighten it up just a tad? Not sure
how to explain it either but otherwise a wonderfully drawn pet c: I'd get one
thats for sure ^^.
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Re: Subetart : 42 Reborn Legeica and Other

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The flames are so very very flowy and pretty! And the hooves and crystal-scale-thingies are so very very shiny.
Its a lovely pet Nyau :D
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Re: Subetart : 42 Reborn Legeica and Other

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I bet I'm super late for asking x3!!
But still.......can you pweettty please with sugar lumps on top make a scribble of my baby kougra please??? Just an ordinary baby kougra...but can you please put a pink ribbon round her neck..please?
I understand if you don't (:

Oh and ps: Just looked through your Subeta art....amazing! Love it <33!! Your a brilliant artist!
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Re: Subetart : 42 Reborn Legeica and Other

Post by ZomgethMew »

Gahh, I meant to comment on this thread ages ago!

First off.. I love the Ice kitty you posted a while back ^w^.

And.. I am in love with most of the pets you posted <3. I would love a scribble from you; if it's not too much trouble, but I'm not really sure who to request one of right now x3.
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