Subetart : 53 Glade Clawsion..instead!

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Subetart : 53 Glade Clawsion..instead!

Post by Goldenchaos »

First, is a long overdue commision, for Xebru..in lineart form..still. Waiting to see what the verdict is on it before I continue! Bring it to you guys..I have no clue what to add to it..

Hydrus Kerubi

COMING SOON..ish. :o

Serpenth: For my pets look up, eventually, maybe, or just drawing a Serpenth for kicks..:O I DO NOT KNOW. It was fun to draw.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v177/ ... arius2.gif

Custom Items:

Just one, for now...and I will take commisions on these too, subetay and all that ..

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v177/ ... /whip2.gif

Its a whip! ...sword...:x So original.

Ice Fish and ..a Salamander!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v177/ ... efish2.gif
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v177/ ... mander.gif

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http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v177/ ... riends.gif

My Fire Aisha and Reborn Ruffie, being best of friends., that, despite how both worlds are seemingly up an arms with each other at times..their friendship will forever last..

:O lol, corny.

Doodled up cuz I had no idea how to make it work, so I went to wtfchibithings

Edit 2:

SCRIBBLIES..thingies.

Cyro
checkers
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jessibean
Xelio
Cranberry
Officer 1BDI


Edit 3:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v177/ ... penthy.gif

:) Markings and scales!

Edit 4:

:O WOOT!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v177/ ... s/adi2.gif
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v177/ ... s/adi1.gif

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v177/ ... idnemo.gif

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v177/ ... seerow.gif

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http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v177/ ... s/aqua.gif
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v177/ ... us/bon.gif
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v177/ ... ofold2.gif
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v177/ ... ofold1.gif
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v177/ ... igment.gif

Edit 5:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v177/ ... /aerie.gif

That WAS going to be a Galactic Aerie, but now, it might look more Spectrumy, what do you guys think?
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After this, Ill put a pause on the scribblies..as Ive commisions to do (Well, just two) Ill continue afterward! :D Plus, also be open for normal commisions
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    Post by FourEyes »

    Oh, wow. I somehow manage to like Serpenths the way they are now, but that Serpenth you drew is simply GORGEOUS.
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    Re: Subetart : 01

    Post by Twofold Black »

    Goldenchaos wrote:Image
    Goooorgeous. Looks very much like the Serpenth (which I would like to like) while being better in every respect. Do you work for Subeta again now? (Er, it was you, right?) I would love to see a Serpenth revamp by you. MAKE IT SO.
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    Post by adi_gallia »

    The Serpenth and the Kerubi (so far) both look great, I like the wings of the Serpenth. he body is a little plain, but then again I don't think it is possible to be any worse than the current Serpenth and it's not that bad at all.

    I wouldn't complain if you revamped the Serpenth. :P
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    Post by Elzaim »

    I think the top one is great with the spines on the tail... but I have to agree that it does make it too feli-ish.

    The second looks a bit better, but the tail part bothers me because it's not a kerubi-tail. It looks more like demi or malticorn tail in my opinion.

    I hope you don't mind, but I green-lined in a kerubi tail on your second drawing to help get more of a kerubi-feeling to it. You might even be able to put the spikes on it afterall! It would look great, I think!


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    I just realize what it was missing that I couldn't quite put my finger on... horns! It needs the hydrus horns on it's head! :D And also, maybe some short claws on it's paws? Most of the hydrys pets seem to have those too.
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    Post by Goldenchaos »

    :) Yea, the Serpenth was fun..I like drawing snakey..things with wings, thus why the Hissi is my favorite pet.. My first sketch had it sitting on its coils, but..it lost the flight of the Serpenth, so, made it like this..x3 this is just the before pic, before I customize the colors some.

    Oh! Thanks Elzaim! That makes it a lot better..and lol, totally forgot those horns too. :) Fixing
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    Post by lavender »

    I agree that the first one did look like a Feli (I thought it was one until I started reading the post. :P

    I prefer the first one - I doesn't make sense to me for something underwater to have a fluffy tail :? I also like the webbed spikes on the first one.

    The Serpenth is lovely! I wish Serpenth had some scales, though. That might look strange, though... Anyways, yours looks SO much better than the on site ones :)
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    Post by Griffin »

    Everything is freakin' fantastic, but I'm particularly charmed by those little scribbly chibis of your Aisha and Ruffie. Omg. Would you consider taking commissions for those? I'd love one for each of my pets, though I understand if you're too busy. =D
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    Post by Goldenchaos »

    Thanks , for all the crits! .

    Cyro, I don't think Id WANT to charge for that..x3 so, free, naturally. Just PM me here, to work out the details.
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    Post by Seerow »

    Ohh I'd love a scribbly thing :D

    Could you do one of Aisek and if you could, Mathias his Buddon, Mathias? He's a merchant, so if you wanna make him selling something go for it, but that may be a bit complicated for a scribble :P

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    Post by Kidnemo »

    You couldn't do a scribble of Bonling and her minion Trina could you?
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    The Fable sits on her back bossing her about.

    If you don't want to do another Leigeica..or if we can have more than one request then maybe my <a href='http://www.subeta.org/petinfo.php?petid ... >Graveyard Tutani and his minion?</a> Your art is so prettyyyyy.
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    Post by checkers »

    Ooh, them Scribbly things are just adorable, I have a baby pet on Subeta that likes to draw, I was wondering if you could do one of him, his mum and friend?

    His mum hasn't been with him for longer than a week since she is like a nurse of Subeta, and ever since he was born she's been flying around country to country. So he has a friend, and could you draw a picture of him his mum and friend? It'd be nice because it could be a picture he drew for her to carry on her when she feels down.

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    The Mum could have her arm around the baby, and the baby has the mouse in its mouth, well dangling by its tail? ^^ The mums pink wing patches are green and she doesn't have a spectrum aura. Pocket doesn't have a glow either..

    Thanks! I can pay 100K if you wish ;3

    edit: Woah, I just noticed from that angle the Illumis has three arms on one side and only one on the other D:
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    Post by Aqua »

    Maybe you could do a scribble for me? They're cute. :o I'd like Fable if you have a spot left for her.

    http://www.blu-rain.net/subeta/fable/fableref.png
    http://www.blu-rain.net/subeta/fable/fabledesign.jpg

    That hydrus kerubi looks really neat. Can't want to see you finish it. :D
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    Post by adi_gallia »

    Ooh can you do a scribble of a Galactic and Gold Aeanoid? The Gold one has a Halo and the Galactic one has devil horns. They are meant to be brother and sister, the Galactic one doesn't have the mist.

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    Maybe you could make them have their necks tangled together or something or something else creative so that it isn't just two Aeanoids next to each other.

    Edit: Ooh too late I didn't count right..well if/when you get a free slot could you do mine? :P
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    Post by Figment »

    Juuuust in case you decide to do more (though don't feel obligated or anything!) I thought I'd sneak in with a request for one of Delyria as she will be, a spectrum sheeta.

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    The two-toned eyes are essential. Everything else .. scribblies! Whatever! I agree with everyone else; they are sooooo adorable and charming. I think I've told you enough times that I adore your art for it to be ingrained into your soul ... but I adore your art! The serpenth is fab -- if they looked like that on subeta I'd want one.
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