Turethir's Subeta Art Thread [New: Graveyard Cadogre]

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Re: Turethir's Subeta Art Thread [New: Spectrum Celinox]

Post by Fullmetal Dragon » 03 Mar 2008 11:24 pm

You forgot, the Celinox has spots on its hind legs, too ;D This is very cute, I like it, myself! And I could tell you what the Celinox's teeth looked like, if you so desired (As it's up to me to decide that kind of thing XD)

This looks great for being done by mouse though, seriously! The only thing I'd say is if it's jumping, its cheekfur needs to be blowing back a bit too, I would think.
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Re: Turethir's Subeta Art Thread [New: Spectrum Celinox]

Post by Turethir » 08 Mar 2008 02:30 am

Thank you! :D The crit is really helpful ^^ And I would love to know what its teeth look like if you would like to divulge!

I drew my intepretation of a common Torrey - I prefer the smaller head and longer arms myself, as that is my personal preference :) I think it came out okay, I hope you like it!

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Re: Turethir's Subeta Art Thread [New: Common Torrey]

Post by Mayhem » 08 Mar 2008 03:30 am

I think the shading on the feet and tail looks a little sloppy, and the feet themselves a little blobby. I like the more defined patterns on the wings and the longer nose, though.
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Re: Turethir's Subeta Art Thread [New: Common Torrey]

Post by Arviragus » 08 Mar 2008 08:52 am

Coming from a very untrained artist, I have to say that your Torrey looks a little big in the bottom.
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Re: Turethir's Subeta Art Thread [New: Common Torrey]

Post by Turethir » 16 May 2008 11:44 pm

Thanks guys. :)

It's been a long time - I only just found the address of the forum again after it changed XD

I was bored so I drew a Feli :)

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Re: Turethir's Subeta Art Thread [New: Feli]

Post by twixy » 03 Jun 2008 06:34 am

I like the Angelic tigrean but its paw seems to be just... there. Like its attached to the shoulder x3
Otherwise it looks really good though =3

The spectrum celinox looks great x3
Although it reminds me a lot of a different spectrum pet pose, and the mouth looks a tad off =3
But the colors and the rainbow prisms are really really nice :D

Woah, didn't notice the second page :P
The Torrey is alright, but I really really like the feli =D
Its sooo cute!

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Re: Turethir's Subeta Art Thread [New: Feli]

Post by hebdenhippy » 03 Jun 2008 07:47 am

Aw, the Feli's really cute, can't find a fault in that one. The anatomy seems perfect and the face looks very sweet ^^

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Re: Turethir's Subeta Art Thread [New: Feli]

Post by Turethir » 12 Jul 2008 04:15 pm

Yay thank you!! :D Sorry I haven't been able to reply for ages, for some reason the board wouldn't let me log in :/ But now it is ^^

Here is something I drew this morning, a Malticorn - hope you like it :)

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Re: Turethir's Subeta Art Thread [New: Malticorn]

Post by larkesyo » 13 Jul 2008 04:58 am

Oh wow, I love all these pictures you're putting up. They're very professional-looking and pretty consistent with the official site style.

The Spectrum Celinox is probably one of my favorites, but that might be because I have a soft spot for that particular species. (My first pet was a Celinox..)

I really love how the rainbows are coming out from the crystals. I hope to see more of these! c:

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Re: Turethir's Subeta Art Thread [New: Malticorn]

Post by Turethir » 13 Jul 2008 02:26 pm

Thank you so much, larkesyo! ^^;

If anybody has any suggestions as to what I should draw next, I'd love to hear them :)
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Re: Turethir's Subeta Art Thread [New: Angelic Tutani]

Post by Turethir » 06 Sep 2008 01:33 pm

Here's my idea for an Angelic Tutani. :)

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Re: Turethir's Subeta Art Thread [New: Angelic Tutani]

Post by hebdenhippy » 06 Sep 2008 06:07 pm

Aw, that's cute ^___^ I love how it's jumping through the halo, that's a fantastic idea! Reminds me of Shamu! I think it's flipper should be a bit further down it's body though, and maybe it should be a bit bulkier so it looks more whale-like rather than dolphin-like. Otherwise it's lovely!

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Re: Turethir's Subeta Art Thread [New: Angelic Tutani]

Post by 23639377 » 07 Sep 2008 10:05 am

EEEE I love the Tutani! Dolphins are pretty! Loving the golden eyes too.
However the tail looks too small on the huge Tutani, and more shading on the halo would look nice.
I'll definitely get one of those if it's really look like that!

I like the malticorn too. *Wishing this is the proposed revamp*

Heart all your art. Very very much.
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Re: Turethir's Subeta Art Thread [New: Angelic Tutani]

Post by Turethir » 07 Sep 2008 12:04 pm

Hey thanks guys! I totally agree with your crits, I did have to rush this one a bit as I was short on time but it's good to know you like it :D
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Re: Turethir's Subeta Art Thread [New: Angelic Tutani]

Post by Heilos » 07 Sep 2008 11:00 pm

I really like most of these, espcially the poses you choose, they show a lot of personality
in my opinion ^^ One thing that bothers me on the angelic tutani is the tail tip,
it looks a bit rushed, the lines are rather jagged and it appears kinda flat shading wise.
But I love the idea of it jumping through it's own halo c: Tis cute indeed, keep
up the great work X3

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