Turethir's Subeta Art Thread [New: Graveyard Cadogre]

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Re: Turethir's Subeta Art Thread [New: Angelic Tutani]

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I LOVE LOVE LOVE the Feli, seriously. Do want.

The Malticorn has a great expression.

The Angelic Tutani is a fabulous idea, but my major nitpick is that it's a whale and not a dolphin. It's a great concept and the art itself is good, but I would make the Tutani a bit thicker and the tailwings a bit more outstretched to show some more detail.
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Re: Turethir's Subeta Art Thread [New: Common Hipposaru]

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Yes I totally agree with you guys that it looks a bit too dolphin-like! I may give that one another go to see if I can get it closer to the original design. :) Thank you so much for your feedback, everybody!!

Here's something I've been toying with, a common Hipposaru redraw...

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Re: Turethir's Subeta Art Thread [New: Common Hipposaru]

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Ha, the expression is cute! But since it's hippo-like it doesn't mind drawing it fatter. On the whole it's good! Lovin' the patterns!
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Re: Turethir's Subeta Art Thread [New: Common Hipposaru]

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Aw, that's really cute!! I love the markings you gave it, and the wings look especially good. I agree with 236393377 though, I think it should be a little fatter, but otherwise it's lovely.
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Re: Turethir's Subeta Art Thread [New: Common Hipposaru]

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I've plumped him up a bit, is this better? ^^

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Re: Turethir's Subeta Art Thread [New: Common Hipposaru]

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Seems to me that the forelimb further from the viewer would attach awfully high up on the body, but that could just be my perspective. The toes are adorable. Perhaps with the bigger gut, which I like, you might want to toy with a broader snout as well? Just fodder for thought.
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Re: Turethir's Subeta Art Thread [New: Common Hipposaru]

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I think you've done very well in updating a fugly species. Nothing against hippos, they're great, but I don't think anything could fix the hipposaru aside from a complete redesign.
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Re: Turethir's Subeta Art Thread [New: Common Hipposaru]

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I think it's legs should be shorter, that's pretty much my only beef with it. It's adorable. :D
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Re: Turethir's Subeta Art Thread [New: Graveyard Cadogre]

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Thanks guys, I'm glad I managed to make the Hipposaru somewhat cute-looking!!

Here is something I worked on this morning, a graveyard Cadogre :)

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Re: Turethir's Subeta Art Thread [New: Graveyard Cadogre]

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I'll be honest (cause I can)-- this is one of my least favorites of yours. The legs are wayyyy too stumpy, it's like a little midget cadogre. I also don't think its shaded quite right for metal, and a lot of the cadogre anatomy and what not feels really off. I don't think robots are your strong point ^_^;
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Re: Turethir's Subeta Art Thread [New: Graveyard Cadogre]

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I really like it, the claws look especially nice and I like the rusted sections. I love how you've made the glass thing at the front fall off too. I think it could do with being a little more shiny, but otherwise it's awesome :D
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Re: Turethir's Subeta Art Thread [New: Graveyard Cadogre]

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Wow, I absolutely adore these pictures =D I don't even go on Subeta, but I had to comment on your artwork. Marvelling in silence doesn't have the same effect xD The line are so smooth, and the positions and colourings are perfect (:
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