Turethir's Subeta Art Thread [New: Graveyard Cadogre]

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Turethir's Subeta Art Thread [New: Graveyard Cadogre]

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Thought I'd create a separate thread for these. Any time I feel like drawing a Subeta pet I'll post it here XD Bear in mind I only have a mouse, not a tablet, so it's kinda hard for me to get some of the effects tablet artists do ^^;

Anyway, here's my interpretation of a Glacier Hikei (yes, I did take liberty with the pet's design, lol!)

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Any suggestions for any future pets would be most welcomed - these are really fun to draw ^^
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Wonderful work, though I think the Hikei's head is a little small, maybe you could darken the patterns on it as well? They're a little hard to see and the Hikei has quite bold patterns normally, maybe make the head a little bigger and darker patterns? I really do love your artwork!
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Okay, thanks for the crit! :D I'll be sure to try that out. ^^
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Nice work, I love it, and the expression is perfect ^^ I'd love to see an Angelic Legeica
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Thank you hebdenhippy! *hugs* ^^

I have done an angelic one, but it's a Tigrean :) Hope you like!

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Wow, that's really nice! I love the pose and the colours are perfect. I like the big halo too ^^
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Thank you!! <333 I was very happy with how this one turned out ^_^

Larger version:

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Please comment if you see this, I love doing these and I would like to share more with you! :)
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This is a bit... old now I guess, but as a critique on the hikei one - you made the tails coming out of the butt ^_^; Tails are an extension of the spine, and should come out of the back, not out of the butt xD
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the Tigrean looks Awesome with a capital A! His right arm/my left looks a bit short to me, but that's just perspective I guess.

Still...very very nice ^^
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Jessibean - omg, I can't believe I didn't notice that XDDD I've never done that before and am usually alright at drawing tails - so thanks for pointing it out! *slaps self* XD
Hope you liked the Tigrean!

danceu4ia - thank you! It may be perspective or it may just be a mistake ^^ I always appreciate crit though, so thanks! :D
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My attempt at a Spectrum Celinox:

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I love how the rainbows are coming off of the crystals! That's awesome. And prismatic eyebrows, lol.

If you added a touch of color to the paws somehow, I'd think it was perfect. :D
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Wow, that's great! I love the Spectrum spots, and the spikes on its back are gorgeous. The whole thing look very happy ^^ which is good for a Spectrum pet. My only complaint would be maybe the head should be a tiny bit bigger, but I'm no anatomy expert so it might be right as is xP
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The spectrum celinox is nice, but I think it looks... toothless? Like with its mouth open, you should be able to see more teeth - it is kind of a big carnivorous kitty thing, after all. I like the larger version more, because it seems to take up a lot more of the white space - when resized, it looks a little empty. But the colors are very nice!
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Mayhem: Strange that you mention that, I did actually try a version with paint splodges but I thought it looked a little too busy. But I will try it again, maybe I could try less and see if it works that way :D

hebdenhippy: I'm not either, so I'm not really sure XD But the feedback is really useful, so thanks for letting me know what you thought! ^_^

Jessibean: There are teeth there, but they're kinda small, you're right XD None of the Celinox pics had teeth references apart from Hydrus with huge fangs, so I wasn't really sure what its teeth were supposed to look like. But still, crit taken on board - thank you!!

Thanks to all three of you, I LOVE to get comments on these so please don't hold back ^_^
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