Heilos art thread

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Heilos art thread

Post by Heilos » 09 Sep 2008 01:44 am

First time posting a topic on this forum so lets hope I get this right XD

Basically since I was bored I took the redline I did for the new proposed malticorn and tried to redraw the same
pose and recreate what I think the new malticorn could look like, since I wasn't 100% happy with the suggested
new look ^^U My lineart is rather shakey and I tried to make it as sharp as I could, I might
have shaded it a bit too much but i'll let you guys be the judge of that. If for whatever reason
the original artist for the new revamp wants me to take this down, I can since the pose and
such aren't mine. o:

If I ever get time in the future i'll try and post some actual original subeta stuff.

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Re: I fail at titles- Subeta malticorn :3

Post by Goldenchaos » 09 Sep 2008 03:22 am

Now that is perfect. It balances the puppy/unicorn mix perfectly.
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Re: I fail at titles- Subeta malticorn :3

Post by Heilos » 09 Sep 2008 05:25 am

Thanks Goldenchaos ^^ glad you like it c:

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Re: I fail at titles- Subeta malticorn :3

Post by Goldenchaos » 09 Sep 2008 05:41 am

Maybe its just me, and its probably not that important, it looks kind of dithery a bit at the butt.

I LOVE the colouring, it does not look plastic and shiny, it looks fluffysilky. :o
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Re: I fail at titles- Subeta malticorn :3

Post by Heilos » 09 Sep 2008 06:26 am

Hmm I think I see what you mean there, I probably rushed the shading a tad on the tail area,
not a huge deal I suppose but I can maybe go back and fix it if I get time ^^

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Re: Subeta Shiz :E- aerie sketch c:

Post by Heilos » 10 Sep 2008 04:12 am

I'll probably finish it sometime soon but I wanted to see what you guys think so far ^^U
Kinda just combine both poses and my own facial expression from the previous suggested
revamps, i think it looks kinda cute? XD the anatomy is probably a bit janky but hopefully
I can fix that lol. Honestly this was a boredom sketch so a lot of stuff is most likely
off but if I decide to finish it I'll most definitely go back and tweak the weird proportions lol.

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Re: I fail at titles- Subeta malticorn :3

Post by 23639377 » 10 Sep 2008 04:14 am

This one is PERFECT. Yay for less puppy-look. The Malticorn looks... so shiny! @_@

I love your lineart too! It somehow seems a bit different from the others - yet a nice way.
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Re: Subeta Shiz :E- aerie sketch c:

Post by 23639377 » 10 Sep 2008 04:19 am

Wow, you draw such quickly!
I quite contented with the last proposed revamp and hope it'll be used very soon.

As for yours...
Yep, the anatomy's a bit odd. Try making the the body a bit larger, perhaps? And don't forget to show off its big, shiny, feathery tail!
Unfortunately I'm always not keen on round headed birds, like the Lain...
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Re: Subeta Shiz :E- aerie sketch c:

Post by Heilos » 10 Sep 2008 04:30 am

Yeah lol my bird creature anatomy sucks XD
I actually did like the newly suggested revamp too, of course with a few tweaks
I think it'll be a great revamp, but I see what you mean, i'll try to fix the body and tweak
the head a tad c: I think maybe i'll try the bird legs on the front and see if that looks
any better c:

Glad you like them ^^

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Re: Subeta Shiz :E- aerie sketch c:

Post by Nectaris » 10 Sep 2008 09:02 pm

I think my biggest problem is that it looks a little chubby. On the other hand, the front legs look a little skinny, though that might be helped if the body itself is skinny.

The wings are quite nice though, they look real enough without being too over-realistic for subeta art.
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Re: Subeta Shiz :E- aerie sketch c:

Post by Heilos » 15 Sep 2008 08:05 pm

whoa late reply sorry about that x-x

Thanks for the crits guys c: I really appreciate it, no new art yet but i'll have something new up soon.
I think I see what you mean the chubby-ness, might be cause the from legs are too small, i'll see what
I can do about that, glad you like the wings though ^^

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Re: Heilos art thread c:/ (Graveyard malticorn)

Post by Heilos » 04 Oct 2008 07:39 pm

Been so busy lately but was up all night last night in the computer lab and decided to randomly
make this since I liked the old Malticorn a bit better then the new one O: Took some ideas from the
newer one though with the tail and stiching parts so hope you guys like it c:

Same pose as the old one just redrawn XD

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Re: Heilos art thread c:/ (Graveyard malticorn)

Post by 23639377 » 05 Oct 2008 06:58 am

I think zombies should be less fluffy. O_O
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Re: Heilos art thread c:/ (Graveyard malticorn)

Post by AngharadTy » 05 Oct 2008 07:32 am

Eh? Why? Zombies have access to hairstyling products, too.

I think the lines are a little thick in places, and I'm still not keen on the tail as an idea (I don't like the tail on the revamped GY malticorn), but overall, it looks great! I really love those colors and that grin. Your version is nice.
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Re: Heilos art thread c:/ (Graveyard malticorn)

Post by Heilos » 05 Oct 2008 08:38 am

Thanks for the crits guys c: yeah I see what you mean on the lineart, probably should have spent a bit more time cleaning it up but glad you like it overall ^^ I personally liked the tail idea but it would also look nice just being fluffy like the rest of tail I suppose. Might go back and try it that way too if I have the time and clean up the lineart more.

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