I've been working very hard on this series recently and want to know how worthwhile it's been, and what needs changing. It's quite long (6 pages a part roughly, and I'm writing the fifth part now - it's going to be at least six or seven parts in the end), so I don't really want to post it all here for fear of putting people off. What I'm doing instead is asking for volunteers to read it and offer opinions. If you want to read it/part of it, let me know and I'll send you the link. You don't have to comment on it but it would be much appreciated if you did. Thanks to anyone who helps me out!
P.S. Did anyone read the first Legend Seekers in the times? This is the sequel to that.