Darigan Hissi Sketch.

[Dead Webby]

As <a href="http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v173/ ... g">this</a> is the first decent sketch i've done in a while, and also the first hissi i've ever properly drawn, I thiought i'd post it up here and see what you guys think. I know the shading isn't brilliant, but apart from that, crit would be useful. Any suggestions to do with the anatomy would be helpful too, please ^^
Thanks!

[chickvw]

Wow, don't put your shading down, it looks good! Only thing I see, is that the size of the wings makes me believe the right one is further from the viewer than is the left one, which is confusing with that first wing spine on the right wing being so much larger than all the others, even on the left wing. Fabulous drawing!

[Dead Webby]

Jees, I can't beleive I missed the hugeness of the Wing Spine until you pointed it out xD

I've <a href="http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v173/ ... e-drawn</a> the right wing, so hopefully Glaiscale looks a bit better now. Thanks!

[chickvw]

Yesyes! Glaiscale looks awesome now