My first comic!

[Mesmirez]

Note to Self: Little black dress is not suitable winter wear.

So here it is, my first public attempt at comic-making. I'm thinking about branching these guys into their own series, but I'd like to get some feedback first. I noticed the peacocks don't have any tails and Def is missing his wings in panel 3 AFTER I'd already got like two panels colored x-x; and I'm afraid I'm all out of lame excuses, too, so... suspend disbelief. Is the text readable? If it isn't, just say so and I'll make it larger. Is it clear enough who's saying what? Just crit me! Crit me hard!

In case you couldn't tell, Qisat (purple), Sia (brown) and Def (blue) are peacocks, and the blissfully ignorant Yhorito is a gryphon.

Qisat "Funky hair" Fulbright (c) Me
Siarenza "I'll thaw in the Spring" Amard (c) Carrot/Mac
Defenestrates "Too cool to be cold" Amard (c) Carrot/Mac
Yhorito "Crossdressing Mini-tyrant" Kass (c) Sock

[anzuronamin]

It's funny I like it, and I giggled when I finish.

My only iff is that the bubbles are hard to read. It may be my monitor, but it's just a bit bright. But other than that, I liked it