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I like how the shading and stuff is done, but I prefer how the other kerubi has got it's head up,...
I think the stripes should be done,... different, it looks like it's painted on it,... it looks odd:P
I'm looking forward when they put the updated one on the site=3

An excellent revamp, Rah! Keeps the same pose and cute look, fabulous. My only nitpick is the ears - they look a bit like a hound dog's ears, like a floppy beagle's. Perhaps a bit perkier? But I'd adopt this right now!

Great revamp! >w< Kerubis are my favorite pets (I have three!), so I'm glad to see them get such a great update! The new one has the spirit of the old one with more detail and less issues! xD Two thumbs up for the artist!

Final version is up!



Final version, suggested revamp, original.

The final version is awesome. Direction of the face spots is fixed, chest ruff looks better, you can see more of a neck, just the back toes are blue rather than the whole foot, leg stripes are smaller... it's really cute and I like it a lot!

wow, awesome!:D
you see also some fur or something on the leg stripes, really nice!^^
didn't know that some persons bothered the head,...

Ah, perfect! Rah, thanks for listening and taking our critiques. Kerubis look solid and better now. =3

Cranberry wrote:just the back toes are blue rather than the whole foot

Huh... why? It's the whole foot on the original. I hope it's not "because the front foot only has the toes colored." Animals don't have symmetry that way. Look at horses with white sock markings!

I wonder if it was just something a lot of people suggested? XD I honestly didn't even notice til Cran pointed it out!

That being said, I absolutely adore this, haha. whatever gripes I had with the face, Rah magically fixed without me even being able to explain it properly to her, and I just think it's lovely <3

ETA - I think I discovered why just the toes are blue. In practically every Kerubi redraw only the toes were accented! Strange that they never matched the common posed one before, but that's my guess!

Mayhem wrote:I like it, this is what a good revamp looks like. It keeps the spirit of the pet, while improving on little things - lineart, color, anatomy... without changing the pet as a whole or making any major changes. More revamps need to be like this.

I hate quoting people and not adding much to my reply, but.. honestly, I can't say anything else. I //love// this revamp, I wish more revamps had gone like this.

Love the new head-wings but honestly, I much prefer the shape of the old eyes. These new eyes feel a little too Disney-ish for me. Otherwise though, I quite like the changes. The stripes being thicker on the ears/tail isn't something I care too much for, but is easy to overlook for the sake of the improvements elsewhere. I agree with Mayhem. More revamps should go like this. Way to keep to the spirit of the original and improve it. Didn't know at first this was Rah, but knowing that it was Rah's work, I'm not surprised I like it.