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Wraith and Pastel Moehog

Posted: 14 May 2014 02:07 pm
by Nogitsune
Image Could be used as a cool tattoo.
Image Looks very rainbowy.

Re: Wraith and Pastel Moehog

Posted: 14 May 2014 09:32 pm
by Color Wheel
Wraith: This seems to be in the same vein as the Wraith Uni, but this time it's a lot less... ridiculous looking, if not a bit simple. The nearest tusk really needs to be defined more, however.

Pastel: While I do like more than two colors on a pastel pet, I have to wonder if four isn't too many (maybe the hooves should have been yellow or the mane purple?) As always, it's up to personal preference. The line art has some issues, though - the eye outlines get lighter at the bottom for no apparent reason, and the pink outlines around the tusks and the tail are far too thick, thus drawing your eyes there instead of the face.

Re: Wraith and Pastel Moehog

Posted: 14 May 2014 10:45 pm
by AngharadTy
The most jarring part of pastel for me is, as you mentioned, the pink outlines on the tusks. Too thick? Too light? Or maybe even too dark? It's hard to say, but it's off-putting. But I do like its yellow mohawk very much, and the blue lines around its pink stripes are a nice touch.