Neocolours

I thought about entering this picture into the BC, it's not my best by a long shot but I never enter my best work anymore because of art thieves.



Critiques please.

Its a good peice of art, but I think that the nearest leg to the front looks a little odd. The 'elbow' part where it bends seems too high up the arm.

I didn't think that was the elbow, I thought it was the curve of its shoulder.

It's thankful that someone draws a Lupe as a Lupe and not a wolf.

I disagree that it is a Lupe...where are its whiskers? It could be any (bright green) dog.

I second the shoulder comment.

Thank you all for your comments. I'll be sure to fix the things you pointed out to me, though I did not put wiskers on my lupe because it is a female.

Female Lupes have whiskers too. There's no sexual dimophism in Neopets excepting those created by the Usuki and Royal paint brushes.

I know, I just thought that it would make it more feminine, but if everyone thinks it would look better with wiskers I'll add them.

I think it would look more like a real Lupe, but you can give her any custom design you like.

Twisted wrote:Very nice, but that leg is jointed too far up-a bit lower would be nice

Im not sure, it looks ok to me, unless I've misunderstood what you mean. If anything, it looks too low.

Well It was supposed to be the shoulder joint... maybe I'll just crop that part off or something.