Darigan Eyrie

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Yfandes
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Darigan Eyrie

Post by Yfandes »

Well i decided to make an art app for a pet.....I probably have no chance but I enjoy art so its no problem....

It started out as this sketch
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Then i refined it, simplified the pose and coloured it, hurrah!

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I don't actually think its changed enough to be called a custom design :?What do you think? Pretty pretty please comment :D
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Dead Webby
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Post by Dead Webby »

Its really good, and lovely colouring- however, one thing. The tail looks like its coming from one leg, instead of from the back/middle, if you get what i mean. Try getting rid of the black horizontal lines on the back leg ^^
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Thanks VanillaCoke for the Set.
Yfandes
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Post by Yfandes »

Ah, ok :D The black lines are supposed to be the shadow of the spine on either side but i've gone overkill with black :oops:
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smirkish
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Post by smirkish »

Dead Webby wrote:Its really good, and lovely colouring- however, one thing. The tail looks like its coming from one leg, instead of from the back/middle, if you get what i mean. Try getting rid of the black horizontal lines on the back leg ^^
Silly. That's IS it's back. The Eyrie is laying with it's lower half sideways. Like dogs do very often. XD
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Thanks Twisted for my set. ^^ And MM for meh evil wooble bunny!
Kuroro
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Post by Kuroro »

I like the pose and the smile on its face.. beak.

Also, it has kindof a fox-coloring (black pawns, black tail tipped?) I also don't know if that counts as a custom design. It's different, in each case.
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