Progress Help: Adoptables

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Funkentanz
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Progress Help: Adoptables

Post by Funkentanz »

Yeah, need some critik before I start with the outlines :)
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Cheese
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Post by Cheese »

Not much I can say about them, they look pretty great.

The zafara does look like it has a beard, though.
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Post by chickvw »

:o I love your zafara, it's fabulous!
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Float
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Post by Float »

Zaffie on its head ^^

There's something about the aisha's face that makes it look.. less catlike? Not necesarily in a bad way. Just there.
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Post by Xelio »

Float wrote:Zaffie on its head ^^

There's something about the aisha's face that makes it look.. less catlike? Not necesarily in a bad way. Just there.
I think it's the length of the muzzle that's throwing off the cat-ness. But really, not all people think "cat" when they see aishas, so it's not really a bad thing.

I love that zafara one. The pose is so cute. I just want to pinch its little toes in the air. ^^ I do think though on the (our) right the foot and leg seem to be turned in an odd angel. It could just be me though.
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Funkentanz
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Post by Funkentanz »

Thanks for your replies so far ^^
I am not really happy withe the Zaffys Legs :/

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By the Way here are the Outlines for the Aisha :)
Float
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Post by Float »

I don't have a problem with the legs so much, because it could be that its kind of flailing, but one does seem to be coming out of its tail heh.
Aldanax
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Post by Aldanax »

Hope you don't mind my late red lining :P
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FaerieInGrey
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Post by FaerieInGrey »

Those adoptables are adorable. Much Zafara love.
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Post by Anaphase »

I think they both look great!

I'm not a big fan of Aishas anyway, but the Zaffy certainly looks cool :)

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Thanatosscythe
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Post by Thanatosscythe »

I'd totally get an Aisha if they looked like that!
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Post by Funkentanz »

Thank you Aldanax, the legs looks better on your Version ^^
I am coloring the Aishas right now, and after that I´ll start with the Zaffys, if only I have more time :)

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Here are some color excamples, any critique on the shading?

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