Neocolours

Graveyard Keeto...very early sketch. Trying to keep the same pose as the old one, considering the old one didnt look like the current Keetos...Spine will show and part of the tail bone , as noted.

Feel free to crit the hell out of it

Eee. I obviously love the current GY Keeto, since I have one, but I like the look of your sketch, too. The hunched up shoulders are really good, and the expression is so irked it's adorable. ^_^ My favorite thing about the current Keeto is how its arm is falling off, so I'm happy to see you're working that in. The spine showing is a great notion! The only thing I'm not sure of is the tail; I didn't like that on the recent GY Malticorn because it just seemed like an interruption. But it does look nice on the Tigrean. It might just be a matter of balancing it so it doesn't look random. =)

Hm..youre right, actually, looking at the tail -now- on the thumbnail it rather looks off. Ill likely go with how the current tail looks..if not just do the bones at the base of it. Ill tweak it around to make it look nice.

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All done!

Bigger version.

http://www.omgimages.net/img/1839/large_64094.png

It looks awesome! I'd get one in a heartbeat. I love how colourful it is, the rainbow is especially good, as is its face, and I love the paint splatters

That's so cool. It looks amazing, I'd totally want to get one if it were official.

I really, really love the accent of the black mane. <3 It looks fantastic with the paint splatters.

Ooh, it's SO dramatic! VERY nice!

Oh, so much love for this. This is how I want my Daray to be. I hope that the real spectrum paralix comes out this good. It's just all I dreamed the spectrum paralix to be. Great job Golden!

Goldenchaos wrote:

I LOVE it, but I think the splatters on the body are really distracting and make it seem too busy. I like the ones on the feet, but I think it would be perfect without the paint bits on the rest of the body.

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anyway, flat colours done...fleshy strips instead of those bone coloured ones of the old one. first time doing graveyard, looks sooo, odd. crits , if needed!

The fleshiness looks good with the bones, but the coloring on the other was just keeto-back-coloring; I think it might be interesting if you had the keeto-back-coloring underneath (and torn up by) the fleshy strips. =)

I love the ears. Heeee.

Cool. I like the fleshy strips. I can't remember if the original had the keeto aura thing, though if it did, you might need to add one. Otherwise, I can't think of anything to change.

:3 and, as per Tys advice, I added the back stripes under the ragged torn up bone/skin thing..

Cooooool. The shading really makes it! I love the back stripes, I think that added a lot. ^_^

It looks amazing! The shading is especially good, and I love the exposed spine, fleshy bit. The back stripes look good too ^^ I think you drew the aura nicely as well.